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Really well composed, as always. You have a very specific sound and since the first second of this song, I knew it was you :P
I must say the begining was a bit abrupt, a slow intro wouldn't be a bad idea, I think. Though, the rest is pure bad ass, the "creaking" at 0:05 and later in the song were great, it gave the song a pretty tasty dark ambiance. Then, when the vocals came in at 0:28, it surprised me, I think you should turn down the volume of the vocals. Then it gets better. And the ending was epic as always, the bells were a great addition, this is the little thing that make the song awesome :P.
Hum, a great piece here. A bit short in my opinion but it loops so it's alright. Nothing else to complain about, just thanks for submitting good pieces.
Author's Response:
I agree with you, under normal conditions I would agree a slow opening would be good. However we are looking at an intense scenerio that doesn't relax until it's over, so the song must loop, and it must be intense from step one.
The tenor voice, though I agree, is loud, it wasn't that much louder in the mix for me... I hope this is not going to be a problem, I should have sent the song around and seen if it performed well on other systems. Thanks for the heads up.
You're more then welcome sonofkirk! Thank you for the review, i'm glad you enjoyed it!
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Lol, "Happy Birthday" Metalized ... never saw this before. Greatly done, the drums sounded a bit progressive so I like it :P. Good guitar job also. Though, it's pretty short, lol. Seriously the end was awesome and I want more, so can you please make a fucking extended version ? You better do this, or ... I come in Canada and will regret it haha.
Keep up the great work my big dude 5'd \m/
Author's Response:
Haha, thats all it takes to get people to come to Canada? Just be lazy and not finish anything? haha.
Thanks for the review, son. Seriously, come to Canada.
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Yeah it was really better, the drums were quite good this time, the programming could have been better but at least you added some cymbals :P. You should turn up the guitar volume in my opinion. Nice guitar melody also.The vocals were louder than in your other songs, nice to see another improvment.
Though, I would like to hear a song from you that you didn't make for fun, it would be intressting :P.
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Author's Response:
Thanks dude!That really means allot to me,considering I generally dont like the guitar riffs I contribute to this project.
I have a song that is nearing completion that I did as another project..Just more serious.Its halloween themed.
Its short but its sweet.Ill be sure to link it to you.
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"Pretty similar to the first song I reviewed"
So yeah you could improve the same things. More cymbals, more solid guitar tone and nicer lyrics lol.
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Thanks.
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That was not bad dude : ). Quite random but yeah, I'm happy to see request on an Heavy Metal song hehe.
The guitar tone was a bit fuzzy in my opinion, it would seem that there was an autowah effect or something. The drums were a messy though, and I know how to program drums. It lacked of cymbals, the kick and the snare weren't enough in my opinion. Though the guitar melody at the end was good.
The lyrics were ... too insulting as Deflektor said, but I read your author's comment so it' ok.
Overall it could have been better but I highly doubt you will update it, so if you wnat to follow myu advices, do it.
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Author's Response:
Ill probobly change the drums later if I can come up with something.My lack of music theory knowledge sorta hinders my ability at..Well.Music.
I got a better song in the works though.
BTW-I didnt use an autowah.
Thanks for the review.
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It was more anbiant than trancy as the guys said, the slow tempo and the pads give the song an obvious Ambiant feeling. About the song itself, it was too simple: the chord progression was the easier you can write and the rhythm was the same during all the song. Those two things made the song a bit boring, though I can imagine that Ambiant songs sound like that.
So, please, put more diversity in your song and it will get better. But one thing, the background sounds vere quite cool, the water and the storm were a nice addition.
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Lol yeah the begining was kinda harsh, surprised me a bit :P. Though I enjoyed the overall quality of the song, almost professional. The instruments you used were good and you did a good job with the delay at the begining, it was well in tempo. The drums weren't bad but it could have been a bit more diversified, I think it's the major problem in this song. Though, it looped very well for me, well done.
A pretty good track, overall. It could have been more difersified, so if you make an extented version make sure to add some samples and patterns : ).
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First thing I noticed, the beat was too repetitive in my opinion it lacked of originality. I got bored very quickly. Also the chord progression was way too simple and it accentuated the boring side of the song. Like Deflektor said, the drum kick saturates sometimes, you could fix it easily decreasing the gain of the kick. Otherwise, the instruments you chose aren't bad but it could be better so yeah keep trying and you will get better : ).
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Author's Response:
The beat is not the most interesting I've made, I know.. But this many comments about it?:P The chord progression was pretty simple yeah.. Cm G Am F If I'm correct.. So yeah, that was not very groundbreaking or anything haha.
I have improved, this track was submitted about a month ago, so that's long enough to improve.
Thanks for the review!
-RES
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The begining had a great ambiance; the pads, the piano and the birds gave the intro a very relaxing feeling. Then when the synth and the drums came in, it was quite groovy I must say :D. The reverb on the snare was very 80-ish lol, I liked it. Then, I enjoyed the arpeggios near the endding, again very nice ambiance.
You really catched the right feeling with this song, I can easily see the coulds and me flying into them :D. A great entry for the Mac8. I can't really give you any advice, just keep it up !
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Author's Response:
You enjoyed everything about it! Yay! Well you don't have any advice so I don't have anything to add, but I appreciate yer review.
Thanks for the review!
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Awesome choice of intruments, the begining was epic as fuck. I don't know what was instrument that moved between the speakers but its was great, good panning job. The other synths sounded very cool also. Though the only problem was the drums. I would rather hear a more solid beat to make the song stronger if you see what I mean ; ). Anyway the chord progression was good, not to simple and not to complicated and overall very effective. Epicness is the word that could describe the song the best. 5'd.
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