Score: 10

"Wow!"

submission: The Movie Movie

date: September 18, 2009

This one was perfect, it shows how your videos production improved since you first submitted Hay Wars. The video quality was great in this one, you managed to keep a good quality even though you had to cut the size of the file. And the light was better than in BTS 2 - there was no very dark scene as in BTS 2. So that's a good point.

One problem though, I'd like to hear better the voices; the voice's sound was actually quite bad I think it comes from the camera mic right? Subtitles would have helped me to understand the whole thing :P. There was a weird delay on the voice at the very beginning of it when it say "Fronickproductions present...", was it intended? It was quite odd to me. Other than that, the musics you chose were good and fitted well the video.

The concept was awesome itself, I liked the idea of a movie inside another movie and that sort of "making of". Kudos for writing the script, it was well written and I assume it was hard to do it because of that "movie inside a movie" thing.

Great humour in this one! The scene I liked the best was when the ninja walks behind you, falls and kills you with that zukini; it was very funny. Awesome acting performance by Nick with the window pane action, it was greatly done. Kick ass production overall :D.

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Score: 10

"Funny"

submission: Beneath the Sheets 2

date: September 16, 2009

I liked the whole because of the jokes it contained and the funny acting of Nick, my favourite part was when ghost shouts at Nick who jumps on the table and spills his plate. The lazer attack made me smile as well. What's more, I enjoyed the subtitles you added to it since I wouldn't have understood a single word that Nick says without them, a very noticable improvement here. But still, the audio (voices) sucks :P.

Though, the video is too much dark off and on - when Nick enters his home and when he's dreaming - I've hardly been able to see what was on the screen while the dream part. Good choice of audio even though the soundtrack was quite on the backgroud.

Some funny shit all around :).

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Score: 4

"Needs more work"

submission: Stick Dudes!

date: June 23, 2009

The overall feeling I had when the flash ended up was that you could have spent more time on it, maybe making it shorter in order to focus on the details.

The animation wasn't horrible and decent for a beginner at flash, I couldn't do better myself. Though work on the smoothness of it, try to make fluid since those lines moving were quite rough. I noticed the movements were really fast and the scenes really short, I advise you to make the actions slower and the scenes longer, it will be less painful for our eyes ;).

I didn't like the drawings to be honest, they were to childish for my taste. Spend more time on the details of the drawing, especially for the backgrounds of the scenes, try to use thinner lines also. Though I keep in mind you are twelve and that you do a better job than what I could do, so I can't criticise to much.

I tried to find any plot in your flash but I didn't find any, it was just a fight and we don't know why these guys are fighting, I just recognized some famous characters but it doesn't really count as a proper plot. As for the audio, you did a good choice and the sound quality was quite close from the original track, so good job.

Overall, keep practising, you are on the right way.

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Score: 10

"Ah you just submitted something new :P"

submission: The Pretenders

date: June 8, 2009

Haha sorry if I'm a bit late, you know alcoh... hum wait, school keeps me away from the computer and NG. On the subject now, I really liked it overall. The story line was cool and captivating in the beginning, but as Coop said underneath, it gets boring after some minutes, it was mainly due to the fact the actions were long.

To avoid that in your next movie, you could try to reduce the length of the scenes. For instance the scenes are a bit disjointed and don't hand out together very well, but nothing too bad. Also I noticed the music quality was decent although you could make the narrator voice cleaner with a better mic or recording software :).

Score: 10

"PUT IT ON YOUTUBE!"

submission: Snow Wars

date: March 27, 2009

You damn statwhore, get it off from Newgrounds and put it on Youtube! Haha, seriously now. Although I already saw this episode, I enjoyed watching it again. I'm going start with the things that could be improved.

I didn't really like the first animated words that say stuff like "A FroNick Production", the moved too much and it was also too long, you could easily make it readable and shorter. I noted that some of the sentences didn't fit the window very well. I won't bitch about the flash and audio quality since you explained the problem on the author's comment and because you provided a link to the high quality version, that's a nice idea. That's pretty all I have to complain about.

Now the good points. I think I've already told you that I loved the music, although the audio quality is quite low :P. The soundtrack gave to your flash an epic side. The audio and the very good acting associated created a very solemn global feeling if you see what I mean. I also enjoyed the menu with the interactive flakes, that was a good idea.

Keep submitting projects you worked hard on. I'm looking forward the next episodes :D.

Score: 8

"The interface was too complicated"

submission: deletequi02

date: October 21, 2008

You did a great job with the animation and the graphics. It looked very professional. Smooth animation, the movements of the characters weren't lagy and a good job with the graphics too, though as I said above, the interface was too complicated. I mean there was a lot of button and and simplier interface would be better in my opinion. But I assume it must a hard job to put so many option. Also the colors could be improved, I mean the blue and the black are too close and I it's difficult to see the elements well.

I liked like the characters are introduced with all their informations and stuff, it's a really good idea. Although I found the interface too busy, the menu at the top of the window is also a good addition (the flash infos, synopsis, characters). And one last thing, nice preloader. The loading was long and the high quality preloader is a good thing. And very last thing, the customized mouse was a good addition.

A good choice of a audio tracks, the sound quality was perfect and the songs were well chosen ... don't have anything to complain about here : ).

Overall it was very good, you could improve the interface and the colors a bit but apart from these two things, it's a really nice work. I'm looking forward seeing the whole flash : ).

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Score: 9

"Enjoyed it !"

submission: Ichi Vs Byaku

date: October 11, 2008

The graphics and the animation were quite simple but it wasn't bad at all, actually, I like this. The drawings were "childish" but I think it add a funny aspect to the flash. As I said, the animation wasn't complex but it was soft and clear. The movements of the characters were smooth, liked it.

It has a lot of action in it and some simple humor which made it funny at times. I liked how this battle started with just a shitty insult, it was very funny. Also I liked the fake credits, it's a good concept. And the round two was a nice addition, though it gets long and a bit "boring" nearly the end, but not a major problem.

The voice that was used at the begining was nice but it's shame that it was the only part with some voice. Please more ! The audio tracks you chose were good and fitted very well the whole flash, good job here.

Overall a good submission, with some good parts and a good style. It could have used more voice though. And last thing, the buttonmon was great =D. Awesome.

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Score: 2

"What's the point ?"

submission: darknessdweller wuz here

date: October 11, 2008

Oh, a Clock Day submission ... But why don't make a funny stuff ? I don't mean a masterpiece, but something cool and funny :P

Graphics ... there was just a thing that I can't name. But at least you didn't try to do something you can't manage to do :P. The animation was kinda inexistant lol, sorry I can't comment on it.

I liked the story, especially when the warrior kills the dragon, very good job here ... lol.

The music was nice, it fitted well the animation. It gets a little boring nearly the end though.

Overall, make a flash the next time : ). Lol.

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Score: 9

"Nice !"

submission: In my mind

date: October 10, 2008

Very good effort man, I really enjoyed it. It kept me viewing until the end what means that it was catchy and well done :P.

A good job you did with the graphics, some parts were very nice. Though the drawing quality changes during the flash, I think it was expected and actually it's not bad at all. Through these changes we can clearly notice the differents dreams, so good job. The colors were nice. I liked, when at the begining, it switchs from black and white to colorful, it surprised me in the good way ; ).

The animation was smooth during most of the flash, but sometimes I got less soft and smooth but once again it's not a real problem. And the animation owes its awesomeness to the synchronization with the music. You did a great job with it, in my opinion it's the best part side of the flash.

I can really comment the story because a Dream isn't expected to follow any rules, this flash just shows the large kindom of the Dream, you really catched this feeling, I was like in a dream ....

The music was well chosen and fited in nicely with the animation, as I said above, great job. Nothing esle to say =D.

Overall, very good production that seems clean and well finished. Oh I forgot a detail, really enjoyed the Menu: it was pretty simple and empty but I enjoyed it. This dark screen made me think of the moment when you are almost sleeping but not entierly, so yeah, good thing.

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Score: 10

"Great"

submission: [SG] TFAS Preview

date: October 10, 2008

It was beautiful, I'm amazed. The first thing I noticed is the colors ... seriously great. At the very begining, the orange and the black fitted very very well togother, very good choice of colors. And same thing during all the flash, again, very good job.

The graphics very nice, awesome I must say. I enjoyed the disign of the character a lot. You can easily feel the feelings of the characters seeing their face, good job catching it. Also, the Axe with the glasses made me think of a NG experience level lol (I beleive it's level 37). Good job here.

Nothing to coplain about the animation, really perfect. I liked the synchronization bewteen the music and the animation. Especially at the begining with the Lightnings and the text. The only thing I could is to add more frames to make the animation more "fluent" if you see what I mean.

Great job, overall! Too bad, it's a preview, I'm really looking foraward the finished product :P.

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