Score: 10

"Wow!"

submission: The Movie Movie

date: September 18, 2009

This one was perfect, it shows how your videos production improved since you first submitted Hay Wars. The video quality was great in this one, you managed to keep a good quality even though you had to cut the size of the file. And the light was better than in BTS 2 - there was no very dark scene as in BTS 2. So that's a good point.

One problem though, I'd like to hear better the voices; the voice's sound was actually quite bad I think it comes from the camera mic right? Subtitles would have helped me to understand the whole thing :P. There was a weird delay on the voice at the very beginning of it when it say "Fronickproductions present...", was it intended? It was quite odd to me. Other than that, the musics you chose were good and fitted well the video.

The concept was awesome itself, I liked the idea of a movie inside another movie and that sort of "making of". Kudos for writing the script, it was well written and I assume it was hard to do it because of that "movie inside a movie" thing.

Great humour in this one! The scene I liked the best was when the ninja walks behind you, falls and kills you with that zukini; it was very funny. Awesome acting performance by Nick with the window pane action, it was greatly done. Kick ass production overall :D.

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Score: 10

"Funny"

submission: Beneath the Sheets 2

date: September 16, 2009

I liked the whole because of the jokes it contained and the funny acting of Nick, my favourite part was when ghost shouts at Nick who jumps on the table and spills his plate. The lazer attack made me smile as well. What's more, I enjoyed the subtitles you added to it since I wouldn't have understood a single word that Nick says without them, a very noticable improvement here. But still, the audio (voices) sucks :P.

Though, the video is too much dark off and on - when Nick enters his home and when he's dreaming - I've hardly been able to see what was on the screen while the dream part. Good choice of audio even though the soundtrack was quite on the backgroud.

Some funny shit all around :).

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Score: 10

"Ah you just submitted something new :P"

submission: The Pretenders

date: June 8, 2009

Haha sorry if I'm a bit late, you know alcoh... hum wait, school keeps me away from the computer and NG. On the subject now, I really liked it overall. The story line was cool and captivating in the beginning, but as Coop said underneath, it gets boring after some minutes, it was mainly due to the fact the actions were long.

To avoid that in your next movie, you could try to reduce the length of the scenes. For instance the scenes are a bit disjointed and don't hand out together very well, but nothing too bad. Also I noticed the music quality was decent although you could make the narrator voice cleaner with a better mic or recording software :).

Score: 10

"PUT IT ON YOUTUBE!"

submission: Snow Wars

date: March 27, 2009

You damn statwhore, get it off from Newgrounds and put it on Youtube! Haha, seriously now. Although I already saw this episode, I enjoyed watching it again. I'm going start with the things that could be improved.

I didn't really like the first animated words that say stuff like "A FroNick Production", the moved too much and it was also too long, you could easily make it readable and shorter. I noted that some of the sentences didn't fit the window very well. I won't bitch about the flash and audio quality since you explained the problem on the author's comment and because you provided a link to the high quality version, that's a nice idea. That's pretty all I have to complain about.

Now the good points. I think I've already told you that I loved the music, although the audio quality is quite low :P. The soundtrack gave to your flash an epic side. The audio and the very good acting associated created a very solemn global feeling if you see what I mean. I also enjoyed the menu with the interactive flakes, that was a good idea.

Keep submitting projects you worked hard on. I'm looking forward the next episodes :D.

Score: 2

"What's the point ?"

submission: darknessdweller wuz here

date: October 11, 2008

Oh, a Clock Day submission ... But why don't make a funny stuff ? I don't mean a masterpiece, but something cool and funny :P

Graphics ... there was just a thing that I can't name. But at least you didn't try to do something you can't manage to do :P. The animation was kinda inexistant lol, sorry I can't comment on it.

I liked the story, especially when the warrior kills the dragon, very good job here ... lol.

The music was nice, it fitted well the animation. It gets a little boring nearly the end though.

Overall, make a flash the next time : ). Lol.

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Score: 9

"Nice !"

submission: In my mind

date: October 10, 2008

Very good effort man, I really enjoyed it. It kept me viewing until the end what means that it was catchy and well done :P.

A good job you did with the graphics, some parts were very nice. Though the drawing quality changes during the flash, I think it was expected and actually it's not bad at all. Through these changes we can clearly notice the differents dreams, so good job. The colors were nice. I liked, when at the begining, it switchs from black and white to colorful, it surprised me in the good way ; ).

The animation was smooth during most of the flash, but sometimes I got less soft and smooth but once again it's not a real problem. And the animation owes its awesomeness to the synchronization with the music. You did a great job with it, in my opinion it's the best part side of the flash.

I can really comment the story because a Dream isn't expected to follow any rules, this flash just shows the large kindom of the Dream, you really catched this feeling, I was like in a dream ....

The music was well chosen and fited in nicely with the animation, as I said above, great job. Nothing esle to say =D.

Overall, very good production that seems clean and well finished. Oh I forgot a detail, really enjoyed the Menu: it was pretty simple and empty but I enjoyed it. This dark screen made me think of the moment when you are almost sleeping but not entierly, so yeah, good thing.

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Score: 8

"Worth the long leading : )"

submission: Nothing In My Way Collab

date: October 1, 2008

Hehe, yeah the loading was long but it was worth the wait. The graphics were rather nice but not always smooth, actually the drawings were sometime bad and sometimes great and smooth, it made this flash a little "messy" if I dare to say. Good animation but like I said about the graphics, the quality isn't great all the time but it's still a good job.

The story was nice and went very well with the music. I can't understand all the lyrics but the few I understand fitted in very well with the story, I have nothing to complain about here, nice job.

The main song was nice and the song you put for the credits was great, you have some good taste ! Also, the sound quality was perfect, but it make your file to big :P.

And last thing, I'm happy to see that you put some efforts with the preloader, it makes the flash even better. And good presentation of the credits at the end, it kept my eyes until the end ; ).

Overall, good effort ! But you can still improve these two things : The file size was too big, optimize the audio file. And second thing, try to follow the same way to draw in the whole flash. 8/10

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Score: 9

"Great !"

submission: sprite or not to sprite?

date: September 28, 2008

Your sprite movies were awesome, sad to see that this one is almost the last : (. But I really enjoyed this mix between sprite and drawings.

The story was great, really. At the begining, he is bored to be in 8bit, then he discover the pencil and at the end he is amazed by his pencil. The story was very well built. My favorite scene is when he realize that he is drawn, it was quite wonderful.

The graphics were so nice, I enjoyed the mix between 8bit and drawn animation. It was so pleasant to see ! You are skilled dude.

The music was well chosen. And it's nice to see that you didn't decreased the music quality like a bastard just to make the file smaller. I hate those guys who don't ware of the music quality ... so good work about it !

Overall, great job. You could have made it a bit longer that's why I'm giving a 9 but it's still a good job. And congrats on the 4th daily place! 5'd

Score: 8

"Really nice !"

submission: Ninja's Creed

date: September 16, 2008

I will begin with the begining. I really enjoyed the preloader, I know it's a minor detail but too many people don't care of the preloader and put a NG preset preloader or don't put any. So, yes, it's a good point.

The graphics were nicely done, rather smooth, it's cool. I liked the lines that appear when the ninja is moving, it show very well the speed of the movments. And I liked the colors also, well chosen.

Though, the only "problem" was the audio. The sound quality wasn't very good. There was too many "clipping" and it doesn't match the animation to be honnest.

Excpet form the audio section that was really good, so a eigth from me, improve the sound quality and you will get my 9 or maybe my 10 lol. Good job, dude.

Score: 10

"Awesome"

submission: How to get Deity

date: September 3, 2008

Lol I have already a Deity, but this was very helpful. Nice interface. Very "smooth" you know ; ). Hopefully a lot of users will get a Deity thanks to your flash :P. Well done man. Congrats !